Thursday, November 8, 2007

Don't Give Up!

The fight has started,
And our steps are not meant to be halted,
Lets take the fight to the end,
Just keep it on my friend.

Just pull the trigger for the change,
Believe in yourself,you do have unlimited range,
Just do not give it up today,or future will cry,
That we had the chance,but not the courage to try,

A warning to enemies,"stop shaking,cant you get steady?,
Because here we come,are you ready?
Day by day,your nightmare is coming,
Can you hear the sound of your defeat drumming?
Just see,we will end you fast,
Lets see,how long can you last?

Everybody is standing up.
And we are not giving up,
When time needs us to get up,we will,
When time needs us to try,we will,
When time needs us to act,we will,
When time needs us to fight,we will,
Because everyone is standing up,And yes, we are not giving up.

6 comments:

Unknown said...

hey!! guess what..even i wrote a poem on similar lines some days back. check!
waise once again good job...however you could have worked a bit more on the flow...i wont be wrong in saying that there was no flow at all...not even within the paragraphs :P

not a great work but definitely an appreciable one

KJ8 said...

even i wrote a poem on similar lines some days back. check

Kahaan par?:P

KJ said...

[[[battle lost is not strong enough,
it can't shatter our hopes of winning the war,
Let the world know,beating our spirits is tough,
Just keep fighting,how much can the target be far?]]]]



karta hoon kabhi edit isse fir se:P
matlab poori poem

Sukalyan said...

Similar to my life at this very moment!

anshul said...

great:D


m copying it:p



khade khade

Anonymous said...

^^^

He s copying evrything!...:O