No Matter,
Whatever,
Happens,
We will fight.
We don't care,
what’s wrong?
And what is right.
But,
We will fight!
As fathers Die,
The children cry,
Let the ladies weep,
And everyone bleed,
Existence gets tougher,
Let everyone suffer.
But,
We will fight!
Peace shot dead,
White becomes red,
Rise of greed,
All devils freed.
Violence peaks,
Days become dark,
Darker than night,
But,
We will fight.
Revenge and fear,
Rule the mind,
to the end so near,
All become blind.
Creators’ creations,
Burning bright,
Death in sight,
But,
Happens,
We will fight.
We don't care,
what’s wrong?
And what is right.
But,
We will fight!
As fathers Die,
The children cry,
Let the ladies weep,
And everyone bleed,
Existence gets tougher,
Let everyone suffer.
But,
We will fight!
Peace shot dead,
White becomes red,
Rise of greed,
All devils freed.
Violence peaks,
Days become dark,
Darker than night,
But,
We will fight.
Revenge and fear,
Rule the mind,
to the end so near,
All become blind.
Creators’ creations,
Burning bright,
Death in sight,
But,
Sambitesh's lines>>
If there isn't "religion"
There always is "region"
If nothing else, there is language
To build up your impotent rage
Ego's slave
Fight we crave
Fuck what is wrong, what is right
But we will fight
7 comments:
Sambitesh was good with words :)
You were crappy as usual :P
But...as always there was a nice theme, some seemingly puerile stuffs repeated again n again- "But, we will fight!" :P
But then, the overall poetic impact was good
edited :P
Sam's one I liked it
Your's errrr.... were those lines or words? :P
I do feel there is a need to make a line have 3-4 words, else it doesn't make the reader think. I was like hurrying through the poem!
this time I changed my way,all others have long lines,this time intentionally kept short
Experimenting :D
The picture used itself portrays a lot.. but something was still missing to cover up the whole set up!
lovely poem :D and the pic is very good :P
aha!! i liked it...i dont know why i like these types of poems :p
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